Fishbowl

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Discussion Starters:
 * 1) In paragraph, what is notable that the writer did well?
 * 2) What do you notice that needs revision?
 * 3) What do you notice about the writer's language and diction?
 * 4) What do you notice about the writer's use of transitions?
 * 5) What do you notice about the writer's use of evidence?
 * 6) What do you notice about the writer's use of elaboration?
 * 7) What do you notice about the writer's conclusion paragraph?